Updates . . . Let me show you them.
I updated twice this week to make up for the lack thereof recently.
Question:
I changed up the toning for Starcrossed from the previous chapter. I thought the screen tones looked bad and instead opted for sort of an inkwash look for chapter two.
I know it’s only five pages in, but what are your opinions of the look?
I’m still sort of experimenting and finding something I like that’s quick and looks good, but I’m curious as to what people think.
I’m trying to find something more consistent with the covers (it seems a little jarring to have a painted cover and something entirely different for the pages), and it would take way too long to make it just like the covers.
Does anyone have any suggestions as to ideas for things to try out?
Let me know!
I like them better (than chapter one’s screen tones). Definitely page 5 works best for me.
Personally, I like it. It gives it a more friendly, cartoony feel, but without taking away credibility. It’s a nice medium. I vote KEEP IT.